After feedback from the class we chose to redraft our storyboard following it. The comments we got were that the first frame of a black screen should be changed to blue, to suit the story theme.
In addition that we should show more shots of tracking into the room to make the movement clearer.
And finally the camera shot of the picture frame should be broken into two shots, one zooming onto the 3 family members, then paning across to the step sister.
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